from a 2/2016 thread here, I am excerpting just the last few sentences of what he plagiarized in the Cloud piece:
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color coded...Daniel C. Peterson wrote:The mass of the Sun is 1.989 x 1030 [sic] kilograms, about 333,000 times the mass of the Earth.The total volume of the Sun is 1.4 x 1027 [sic] cubic meters. Thus, roughly 1.3 million Earths could fit inside it. The sun contains 99.8 percent of the mass of the entire solar system, leading astronomers Imke de Pater and Jack J. Lissauer, authors of the textbook Fundamental Planetary Sciences [sic], to refer to the solar system as merely “the sun plus some debris.”Tim Sharp wrote:The total volume of the sun is 1.4 x 10[^]27 cubic meters. About 1.3 million Earths could fit inside the sun. The mass of the sun is 1.989 x 10[^]30 kilograms, about 333,000 times the mass of the Earth. The sun contains 99.8 percent of the mass of the entire solar system, leading astronomers Imke de Pater and Jack J. Lissauer, authors of the textbook "Planetary Sciences," to refer to the solar system as "the sun plus some debris."
Peterson wrote a mea culpa he wrote for that one also, ("An apology regarding my “Interpreter” article today," ), which he repeated in the Interpreter article's comment section, as well as adding the below:
Daniel Peterson on February 27, 2016 at 7:27 pm wrote:Some changes have now been made to the text, and Tim Sharp’s article has been credited in note 3.
After his "changes," here is how that plagiarized passage looks in the Interpreter today:
The Sun’s mass is 1.989 x 1030 kilograms, or roughly 333,000 times that of Earth, and its total volume is 1.4 x 1027 cubic meters. Thus, about 1.3 million Earths could fit within it. In fact, the Sun contains 99.8 percent of the mass of the entire solar system, which is why Imke de Pater and Jack J. Lissauer, in their textbook Fundamental Planetary Sciences, quip that our solar system is essentially “the sun plus some debris.”3
Notice that "3," after the five words, the sun plus some debris, in quotation marks?
Here's footnote 3:
3. Jack J. Lissauer and Imke de Pater, Fundamental Planetary Science: Physics, Chemistry and Habitability (New York: Cambridge University Press, 2013), 4. See also Tim Sharp, “How Big is the Sun?” (http://www.space.com/17001-how-big-is-t ... e-sun.html).
The quotation marks around ONLY the 5 words, which by the way were also in Tim Sharpe's excerpt with a footnote, and Peterson's footnote 3 with the added "See also," DO NOT indicate that the material is still exactly the same ideas as expressed by Sharpe, still exactly in the same order, still using almost the exact same words. Changing some synonyms does not erase the plagiarism.
This habit of Peterson's was discussed on the Faith-Promoting Rumor blog also in early 2016, ironically about yet another DCP plagiarism incident. Commenter TT summed it up thus:
Faith-Promoting Rumor commenter TT wrote: ....check out the link that [was provided] below.
[ https://disq.us/url?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw ... id=2325380 ]
{From the above link,] This is an example of what is called there "word for word plagiarism" and a "patchwork paraphrase."
For example, "Even if the [writer] had acknowledged [the source] as the source of the content, the language of the passage would be considered plagiarized because no quotation marks indicate the phrases that come directly from [the source]. And if quotation marks did appear around all these phrases, this paragraph would be so cluttered that it would be unreadable."
And,
"even though the writer acknowledges the source of the material, the underlined phrases are falsely presented as the [writer's] own."
It is what BYU's honor code calls "plagiarism mosaic."
https://registrar.BYU.edu/c...
"The borrowing of words, ideas, or data from an original source and blending this original material with one’s own without acknowledging the source."
These are the writing standards of every professional organization I know, though I don't have the DN writing guidelines, I'd be surprised if they did not adhere to professional journalism standards along these lines.
Providing a link [to] the source one is copying is not a defense.
http://www.patheos.com/blogs/faithpromo ... eret-news/
Peterson's "correction" of the plagiarism in his 2016 Interpreter article was wholly inadequate. It will be interesting to see his "corrections" moving forward.