charity wrote:Blixa wrote:Charity you have consistently misread at least 3/4 of the posts I've seen you address. You seem to jump to things too quickly in your efforts to "correct".
The wording on the current monument reads exactly like the public relations wary evasion that it is. My father, not an anti-mormon, critic or any combination of those terms, visited the site with me once and pointed out, incredulously, the number of time Hinkley's name in on it and how self-congratulatory the whole thing looked.
I did not misread Larsen. To say that the monument is built out of respect for the Church, as Larsen said, is hokey. Your criticism of me "misreading" posts probably comes from the fact that I can cut through the balogney that so often appears here under the guise of "logic."
Larsen's reading is not "hokey"; nor is it inaccurate. The way the sentence is written allows for two quite different direct objects: either the victims, or the Church. It would have been easy enough to make the sentence clearer, e.g.:
This monument, which was built by the LDS Church, is intended as a memorial for the men, women, and children who died on 9/11/1857."
But that's not what it says. The author of the line on the actual memorial was obviously concerned with image and PR issues. I find it quite odd that the word "respect" was chosen. I.e., what is there to "respect"? Did the victims of MMM do anything that was "respectable", per se? I don't think so. This was a poorly chosen word, in my opinion, and sadly for Church defenders, it has the effect of confusing the direct object of the sentence. One could argue that this is a kind of "grammatical egalitarianism," but, I have to ask, why should the Church be congratulating (or "respecting") itself here? The mood should be crafted to memorialize the victims, not the Church.
To my mind, the monument does a poor job of honoring the victims. The site, coupled with GBH's speech, seems aimed more at trying to exonerate the Church of any wrongdoing, which, in effect, defeats the supposed purpose of the monument.