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Re: Roman Story & Book of Mormon Similarities

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Benjamin McGuire wrote:Roger writes:
I agree. You have not demonstrated tainted evidence. Instead you acknowledge the parallels are indeed parallels. You simply want us to believe they are not significant parallels because you can allegedly cite "thousands" of others. To demonstrate your point you cited another story with three similar items and a number of differences. So far I do not find your counter-argument compelling for reasons I've already stated.
I suspect we are at an impasse. Unless you produce some sort of recognized methodology to demonstrate that your parallels are indeed significant, there isn't much else I care to say. Taking your word for their significance is something I will not do. And obviously, you aren't too interested in saying anything else.


Wow. Can you say "FARMS"?
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I can.

But I don't grant your point.
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Daniel Peterson wrote:I can.

But I don't grant your point.

Why not? Isn't it true that, impressive as parallels between the Book of Mormon and actual historical documents may be, it's nearly impossible to attest to their significance without doing some kind of analysis that Benjamin McGuire described?

The Book of Mormon is a pretty long document. How many Near Eastern "bullseyes" would we expect from the it if it weren't true or divinely inspired? If we can't answer that question, we have to reserve judgment on how what chiasmus and Asherah tell us about the Book's authenticity... right?
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JohnStuartMill wrote:Isn't it true that, impressive as parallels between the Book of Mormon and actual historical documents may be, it's nearly impossible to attest to their significance without doing some kind of analysis that Benjamin McGuire described?

Was that your point?

I'm all for analysis.
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Daniel Peterson wrote:
JohnStuartMill wrote:Isn't it true that, impressive as parallels between the Book of Mormon and actual historical documents may be, it's nearly impossible to attest to their significance without doing some kind of analysis that Benjamin McGuire described?

Was that your point?

More or less.
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Then I agree that analysis is a good and necessary thing.

Why did you mention FARMS?
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Wade:

Roger,

When you get a moment, could you answer a similar question to the one I posed to Marg:

If you view the Criddle wordprint study and Dale's parallel phrases study, both of which rely exclusively on the extant manuscript, as evidence that the Book of Mormon was a plagiarism, they why don't you think the Book of Mormon was plagerized from the extant manuscript?


Mainly because the parallels are not as explicit as those given by the witnesses who claimed to have read Manuscript Found (or heard it read to them). For example, as I'm sure you know, there is no mention of Lamanites or Nephites in the Roman story, whereas the witnesses claim there was in Spalding's ms. It is no secret that the Roman story does not parallel the Book of Mormon to the extent claimed by the witnesses. Mormon apologists see that fact as an opportunity to argue that the S/R claims were contrived by Hurlbut through witness coaching... but that does not make logical sense. If Hurlbut were coaching witnesses then their testimony should line up with the Roman story.

However if we simply listen to the testimony of the witnesses who state that Spalding wrote at least two ms's, it makes sense and we would still expect to see some parallels between the Roman story and the Book of Mormon because it was a rewrite (or MF was a rewrite, depending on which came first) by the same author using a similar idea but changing some elements around.

There are two obvious issues here, though. The first is why would we expect to see similarities between the Roman story and the Book of Mormon? Other than plagiarism the only answers are coincidence or that there are no parallels, which, I think, is easier to do with the Book of Mormon than with Smith's discovery narrative. The second issue is the discovery narrative parallels. That's where it really gets wierd. No one can effectively explain those parallels. Dan vacillates between recognizing them as parallels but of no consequence to not even recognizing them. Ben recognizes them but says he can come up thousands more. But when I add the challenge to find similar parallels from an author who had already been associated with the Book of Mormon prior to 1838 things get really quiet.

It is that convergence of coincidences that--to me--necessitates that we take a good hard look at what the witnesses (who claimed there was a connection between Spalding and the Book of Mormon) actually said. They said there were at least two ms's. Also, as Dale demonstrated, I think it is more than reasonable to conclude that the Roman story is not the ms that was submitted to Patterson for publication.

In other words, why aren't the reasons you believe the extant manuscript wasn't plagerized, not also the same reasons to reject Criddle's and Dale's studies as sufficient evidence of plagerism?

Thanks, -Wade Englund-


I really hesitate to speak for either Craig or Dale because both are much smarter than I am and both can do a better job, so take what I say here with a grain of salt if it in any way differs from what they have or would say....

...given that disclaimer, however, I do not think either one of them set out to prove plagiarism between the Roman story and the Book of Mormon. Rather the Roman story is a known writing of Spalding and--I think--was used as a sample of Spalding's writings. Phrases and words used frequently by Spallding were used to develop a "word print" unique to Spalding and then tested with various portions of the Book of Mormon to see where or if there were high levels of correspondance. My understanding of the results is that--at the very least--there does seem to be a high level of correspondance between the latter portion of Alma and Spalding.

To my limited understanding, this cannot prove that Alma represents a plagiarism of Spalding, but what it does show is a very high level of overlap so that one might reasonably conclude that the same author who wrote Alma probably also wrote the Roman story. The problem, of course, is that even if that is true, Alma still was probably not copied directly from a Spalding manuscript, rather it would have likely been dictated with edits and changes so that the current edition of Alma is not exactly as Spalding would have written it. That makes it difficult to evaluate. However, that the computer did indeed seem to find a high-level of overlap with Spalding's word-print is--to me--significant.
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Roger,

You state,

Phrases and words used frequently by Spallding were used to develop a "word print" unique to Spalding and then tested with various portions of the Book of Mormon to see where or if there were high levels of correspondance.


This is utterly false. First, no phrases were used in a matrix of 110 words that was developed. These are not stylistic words but rather mundane a, an, was, is, were, there, etc... words. Correspondence is not correct. Relative probability among the authors tested was the statistical expression the Jockers' study was able to produce. Nothing more than that.

My understanding of the results is that--at the very least--there does seem to be a high level of correspondance between the latter portion of Alma and Spalding.


Spalding's relative voice only among the tested authors finds expression there but so do unexplainable expressions as well. It also shifts in a arbitrary pattern that there doesn't seem to be reasonable explanation for. The matrix is often times statistically insignificant but that doesn't express in the results. For example the difference in the amount of usage per chapter in the Book of Mormon of the accepted words is very small (between 5 and 10) but the percentage probability expresses itself in the results in an impressive to the reader percentage, these insignificant chapters were never defined in the study. I could on...

To my limited understanding, this cannot prove that Alma represents a plagiarism of Spalding


Agreed, by a long, long ways.

but what it does show is a very high level of overlap so that one might reasonably conclude that the same author who wrote Alma probably also wrote the Roman story.


Absolutely false. Reasonableness is not yet met. Seriously. Craig is working on other statistical outlays for a reason, he knows that. If you did the same study but took Spalding out of it and used the other authors one of the left authors will have the highest relative probability, would you then state that it is reasonable to conclude that author wrote Alma?

The problem, of course, is that even if that is true, Alma still was probably not copied directly from a Spalding manuscript, rather it would have likely been dictated with edits and changes so that the current edition of Alma is not exactly as Spalding would have written it. That makes it difficult to evaluate.


You are now getting closer to a proper analysis. With the editing claimed to have been done by Rigdon and the religous and historical aspects of every chapter and verse nearly impossible to bifurcate and the attempt by Spaulding to change his style - and Rigdons and other front mens (in your theory) style added arbitrarily, (as well as J.S. own obvious additions) t is frought with evaluative difficulties.

However, that the computer did indeed seem to find a high-level of overlap with Spalding's word-print is--to me--significant.


Yet, your are the one throwing bias around like a frisbee. Why? It is obvious you don't even understand the results of the study. You don't understand what Ben has been patiently attempting to explain nine ways to Sunday to you. I suppose the high degree of "overlap" (your word) of Isaiah in chapters we know were not Isaiah doesn't concern you at all, parallels that don't raise to the level of significance are to you on a manuscript that Joseph factually never even saw nothing to bring you pause for reasons that aren't satisfying; but you insist are. The stylistic problems that the study doesn't speak to which are seriously problematic don't concern you. The necessary total re-construction of J.S. history doesn't concern you and the problems that entails. The number of complex members that would have to have known the plot you suspect doesn't concern you even when their benign history is known to us. The ridiculous testimony concerning a stranger appeals to your sense of reason and causes you no angst. The Aron Wright statement that was never signed, contrary to Howe' s diligence in doing so is accepted cart blanche by you but without it there isn't any early testimony that allows for another manuscript and Aron Wrights first statement essentially rules that out - but no problem that is just a Mormon apologist, all the other enormous difficulties with this idea just allow for your speculation without any angst and just zingers of "Mormon apologists" and "bias" thrown loosely around when in fact many professional non-Mormon historians don't buy it - but that doesn't create any dissonance for you, I could go on.....

but a computer statistic that you don't even understand is definately significant to you is.... well, hardly surprising.

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Roger writes:
Subjective. We just disagree. The parallels are unique in their clustering and chronology and when you consider who wrote them.
Roger, this is one place where there exists a body of literature with accepted sets of criteria to judge this issue. If you want to move away from subjective labeling as much as possible, this is the direction it has to go. Otherwise we never get much beyond where we are in this discussion. It is a problem which has plagued LDS studies for quite some time, with a whole spat of "my parallels are better than yours" kind of issues.

If you want to wait, I talk about formal methodolgies in this regard in my forthcoming article in JOBMSARS (my that's a mouthful now), coming out in the next issue (which I have been told is being released this month, but the date keeps getting pushed back). And I am happy to discuss your issues at that moment.

As far as dating goes, chronology has no impact on the question - except, of course, that it does exclude some things. An early work obviously can't steal from a late work. But simply putting two works into the same time and space creates an additional burden not a smaller burdern - precisely because you have to find a way to exclude the kinds of parallels that are created by a common language, a common dialect, shared euphamisms and so on. These can just as easily be attributed to environment and not to creative borrowing from another text. For example, as with the phrase that was something like 'on the banks of the river', you have to look at other contemporary accounts and see how often other authors used the notion within that same environment, and if it occurs regularly, then it loses a lot of value as evidence of direct borrowing from one source to another.

Similarly, when looking at this kind of reliance, you have to make sure that there isn't a related body of literature. Where does Spalding get the idea of buried records for example? Vogel argues that buried stone boxes in Indian Mounds was a fairly common notion at that time period in that area, and so it shouldn't be taken as having come from any particular source (and he lists several similar types of accounts).

These kinds of problems have to be taken into consideration, and in a way that reduces the subjectivity as much as possible.
That's where testimony enters the debate.
Unless you can establish the veracity of the testimony, it isn't really that valuable - for the reasons I have already listed. You can always use it for your own reasons, but understand that in general, such an argument won't be accepted - and not simply because there is a desire to throw out as much as possible - rather, because the evidence itself is quite contested (and not just by believing LDS).
Acknowledged. But these are not typical parallels. There is a specific context that needs to be considered along with the parallels.
I think this depends on what you mean by specific context. If you are talking about textual elements then yes. If you are talking about historical scenarios, then no.
When the conversation gets beyond layman's terms, I leave it to the experts. A lot of smart people think Craig Criddle et al has used an appropriate mechanism which supports Dale's previous observations. I've seen nothing to suggest otherwise.
Criddle's study has very little to do with this subject. And I reject it's validity for a number of reasons. I would be happy to bring these issues up for discussion. I think the two biggest issues are - 1) that the study can only give us comparative probabilities - that is, for any textual sample, it can only tell us which of the test authors was most lkely to be the real author. In connection with this, it cannot tell us how likely it is that that person is the real author. If we reduce the test authors to a single author, that chance is (and this can be seen mathematically) 100% every time. Even if we know that that person cannot be the author. Can this be fixed? I think so.

2) The problem with the control samples is pretty big. The two control authors were fairly similar to the Book of Mormon - but also very similar to the artifical Isaiah/Malachi author. If we exclude the obvious chapters copied from the KJV of Isaiah, about a third of the text was incorrectly attributed to this Isaiah/Malachi author. Were we to run the test again without this author included, many of these misattributed chapters would appear to be reassigned to the two control authors and not to Spalding/Rigdon/et al. Meaning that the artifical Isaiah/Malachi identification ought to be seen as a control text and not immediately dismissed as the study does.

And of course, Joseph should have been included in the list of authors. Better yet, they should have scrapped the somewhat arbitrary vocabulary, picked another 200 authors, used a most common word list from that era (what they get is actually pretty close, so that's not much of a change) and tried to repeat the calculations using a lot of authors. In theory this shouldn't change the results, right? But when it does, we can only conclude that the narrow selection of authors pre-determined the outcome. However, such a wordprint study still can't tell us if plagiarism occurs, since it deals exclusively with vocabulary and not structure.

My own examination of 3, 4 and 5 word locutions indicates that on a basic phrasing level, there isn't any particular similarity between Spalding's work and the Book of Mormon that rises to a level above what we find between the Book of Mormon and other contemporary literature.
You're asking me to read Joseph Smith's mind. The answer could be that he was simply lazy--an attribute, by the way, that some of those who knew him claimed he possessed. Why should it be up to me to attempt to discover Joseph's motives?
Because otherwise you aren't making a very coherent argument. That's pretty simple. The act of plagiarism involves deliberate mimesis (not accidental, not coincidental, but deliberate). Being deliberate implies very strongly some kind of intention. Intention can be discussed in terms of the text. So you have to have something to say about it, or the argument starts to lose a lot of its impact. If Joseph has no reason to borrow from Spalding in these rather common details, then why does he do it? To say that it is unimportant when you are suggesting that he did so intentionally isn't going to go very far.

My forthcoming article which does deal with a case of literary borrowing in the Book of Mormon spends a fair amount of discussion on the question of intentions.
You could easily demonstrate that the coincidences I am suggesting are extraordinary, are not, by simply taking me up on the challenge I put to you in my previous post. I note that you ignored that challenge. If you can produce a genuine text written by one author prior to 1838 that has an equal or greater number of parallels to Smith's 1838 discovery narrative and was written by an author that people had been associating with the Book of Mormon since 1832, I will be convinced.
I ignored it because your challenge is too narrow. The reason is that coincidence isn't bound by content. If I can produce two texts which share a list of parallels between them (and they don't have to have anything in common with the Book of Mormon, the discovery story, or Spalding's work) that should work, right? I would be happy to provide that - because that would show that this kind of set of parallels occurs by coincidence. I don't need to duplicate them exactly.
I see. Attacking my "experience" might work where other arguments have not?
How much literary theory have you actually read? Have you read any arguments that deal with this kind of issue? I am legitimately interested.

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JohnStuartMills writes:
Wow. Can you say "FARMS"?
Then the next issue of Journal of Book of Mormon Studies and Restoration Scripture ought to be a pleasant surprise.
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