Tom wrote:Hedelius's review seems to have been rushed into print.
At a minimum, footnotes seem to be missing for the following statements:
[SNIP!]
For some reason, Hedelius fails to provide citations to Stephen Robinson's writing when she discusses Jackson's uses of Robinson's work.
Here she channels Professor Midgley: "Who is Reverend Jackson? And, in his own opinion, what led and qualifies him to
opine on
Mormon things?"
Yet another devastating account, Tom. The standards over there seem terribly low. Speaking of which, it seems that a couple of new comments have been added:
Daniel Peterson wrote:Michael Otterson is writing a different kind of piece. For a book review, saying things like “he’s on the attack already” and “the well thus tidily poisoned” are scarcely “uncivil” or “confrontational.”
It’s certainly not inappropriate or unchristian for a theater review, say, to comment that a play is “poorly written” or “not particularly funny” or “badly acted.” Such expressions are the coin of the realm.
They are not the "coin of the realm" in
academic book reviewing, though, and I suspect that DCP would be reluctant to give up that particular descriptor.
Perhaps more pertinent to this thread, though, are Hedelius's own remarks:
Cassandra Hedelius wrote:Dr. Jackson, hello. A few thoughts on your various posts above:
1) I’m baffled by the claim that it was dishonorable for Interpreter to publish a review by one without “formal biblical/historical education.” Given that you state clearly the book was aimed at a “broad Christian audience,” and even more broadly, “interested non-Christians and Mormons,” such credentials are unnecessary. Furthermore, anyone who reads your book (which, despite the caveat that I don’t think it’s terribly enlightening or accurate, I wouldn’t actively dissuade) would find that it is definitely written for a non-specialist audience. I’m well-read on Mormonism and Evangelical Protestantism, and I stand by my analysis.
2) If you read my review more closely, you will see that, contrary to your claim, I did indeed “address the fact that the whole book is based on Mormon sources.” I specifically mentioned your over 40 citations to Mormon Doctrine by McConkie and your many citations to LDS scripture, then noting that in addition you “resor[t] frequently” to critical non-Mormon sources. This is an accurate summary of your endnotes. And the fact that you quoted Mormon sources doesn’t lay to rest the question of whether you used them well.
3) You say: “If Mormonism is Christian as you claim, and I am a Christian, then I am simply a Christian examining a segment of Christianity. Why is that so odd?” Reverend, I think you’re a decent chap, and so I hope you just didn’t think clearly about this. Neither you nor your book anywhere affirm that Mormonism is Christian. You approvingly cite the point of view that Mormonism is a cult. You everywhere laud Evangelical Protestant (though you simply label them “Christian”) beliefs as distinct from Mormon ones. You caricature and misrepresent Mormon beliefs, despite indications that you know better. I would have no objection whatsoever to a Christian examining Mormonism as a segment of Christianity if he considered seriously Mormons’ Christian beliefs and characteristics. Even if he ended up determining that Mormons are not Christians, I would respect his sincere attempt to grapple with Mormon thought. You did not do so.
4) I decline to debate you, although I thank you for the invitation. I wish you well in your efforts to promote your book.
5) I apologize that my writing style offended you. I didn’t mean to be glib or smug, only trenchant. I tried to give a full report of your and your book’s virtues, and was honest in my portrayal of its deficiencies. It’s really much better than many dismissals of Mormonism from an Evangelical standpoint, but that’s such an overcrowded and low-quality genre that being a cut above still isn’t terribly high.
6) I wish you well, Dr. Jackson. From what I’ve seen on your resume and website, you’ve been a devoted friend to humanity and disciple of Christ. I hope that some day you will acquire a deeper understanding of Mormonism, but our differences in the meantime do nothing to lessen my admiration.
So... There you have it. A couple of thoughts:
1) Why is she chickening out of the chance to debate Jackson? Is she afraid of getting crushed?
2) Does she realize that "trenchant" can be a synonym for "biting" or "cutting"?
3) Was her post "edited" is the same manner as her "article"?
I have to say, I don't think this was a wise move for Hedelius.
"[I]f, while hoping that everybody else will be honest and so forth, I can personally prosper through unethical and immoral acts without being detected and without risk, why should I not?." --Daniel Peterson, 6/4/14