Nevo wrote:Blixa wrote:The ideas may seem extreme, though in large part they are just taking the idea of the restoration to its most absurd conclusion [or is the conclusion really that absurd considering the premise?], but I don't think you can say its badly written. That's a pretty sad way to dismiss it.
"The doctrine of restoration we argue has been understated in relation to Joseph Smith's role. His position as a king could have in fact reflected his person instantiating the postexilic reign of kings. But his role of restorer might help to explain some of the even more important, peculiar and alarming actions of Joseph Smith, specifically in relation to polygamy, which practiced for a limited time may well have been a vestigial component of the restoration itself."
Joseph Smith's position reflected his person instantiating the postexilic reign of kings? That qualifies as bad writing in my book.
A tad awkward, but it's one sentence. It would read better, "His position as a king could have in fact reflected an instance of the post-exilic reign of kings." I don't "agree" with the text, by the way, but its still not an example of "undergraduate" writing, or whatever you think dismisses it. Whether it is credible as apologetics or parody thereof is another matter entirely...