MrStakhanovite wrote:Buffalo wrote:
Brothers and Sisters, how blessed we are that the heavens are indeed open, that the restored Church of Jesus Christ is upon the earth today, and that the Church is founded upon the rock of revelation. Let us magnify our calling as a true child of God. I and my family are grateful for the restoration of the Gospel of Jesus Christ. I know that this is really true and He loves us so much..
Not bad for a never mo.
Almost there.. some tips:
"heavens are indeed open" +1, very mo!
"rock of revelation" -1, sounds too EV.
"magnify our calling" +1, good good
"the restored Church of Jesus Christ is upon the earth today" +1, very mo!
" I know that this is really true and He loves us so much.." sounds off for a mo, it should read, "I know that this church is true. I know that God love us and answers our prayers"
And to be mo' you must always end it with, "I say these things in the name of Jesus Christ, Amen"
It is sooooo easy that even babies can do it!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EVEVDgVmBtM