His entire premise of attempting to help is just flawed that's all. He says
"For all intents and purposes, the possibility of life began not with the violent explosion of the Big Bang but rather earlier, with the benevolent invitation of a loving exalted being to those intelligences that would become his children." (Patrick Mason, "Planted: Belief and Belonging in an Age of Doubt," p. 26)
This is so basic.... and so flawed that the rest of the sky scraper of Mormonism topples with it.
There is no before before the Big Bang. What Mason apparently failed to grasp if he ever studied the Big Bang is that everything originated in the Big Bang.... EVERYTHING, time, space, even the putative "intelligences" and most especially that embodied loving being he thinks exists. THAT certainly could not have existed as actual matter before the Big Bang, since, for all of our actual physics, mathematical understanding, and theorizing, we understand so far that there was no matter before matter existed which all came from the Big Bang. Even spirit being refined matter could not have been adrift outside the Big Bang because it couldn't have existed. Mason is simply making stuff up. An honest reading of Stephen Hawking or Brian Greene would have helped him out here.
I will give Mason credit for making the attempt at reconciliation with logic, reality, and powerful reasoning, but his testimony is so ignorant of truth, I see no reason to even meet him half way and try to make Mormonism work out through the troubling aspects of its unreality and wishful thinking that many have now come to see in their religion, including me. Someone stronger and better informed in the reality and logic of where we are needs to step up to the plate and take a swing, Patrick Mason is ill suited for the job.