Okay, I'm working on it now.
In the interest of full disclosure, there is some yucky parts in the next chapter. And, as you read, you'll find the religious arc of the story more distinct. So if religious people turn you off, then you may want to stop here.
But I'll post soon.
Okay, here's the first installment. Let's see what happens.
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Re: Okay, here's the first installment. Let's see what happens.
After review from a couple of other sources, there is a better version of chapter 1 posted above. I think it's better anyway. But that's the process, cutting and snipping to produce something better. I'm quite sure there are several more versions yet to come.
Should anyone be interested.
Should anyone be interested.
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Re: Okay, here's the first installment. Let's see what happens.
Still interested. Gotta move away from the gore of ch. 2 in order to go through it objectively. LOL
Huckelberry said:
I see the order and harmony to be the very image of God which smiles upon us each morning as we awake.
http://www.vatican.va/archive/ccc_css/a ... cc_toc.htm
I see the order and harmony to be the very image of God which smiles upon us each morning as we awake.
http://www.vatican.va/archive/ccc_css/a ... cc_toc.htm