rcrocket wrote:My goodness. This is the only quibble you have with a 65-page heavily footnoted article?
I have other "quibbles," but this is the one you asked about.
Even Mr. Bagley himself has not disagreed with my quotes from the Bishop letter, and my article castigated him for not including this letter. He finally admitted to me that he should have referenced it.
Did you discuss with Bagley your misleading use of ellipses.
In any event, "facts connected with the trial and history of the case" encompassed the whole world.
Nope, they deal with the legal proceedings, but YOU used the ellipses to suggest Bishop's reference "encompassed the whole world." That's my beef with your use of the butchered quote.
Facts connected with the trial connote facts which came out during trial as well as procedure.
Bishop didn't write "facts
coming out during the trial," so you shouldn't have assumed as much. Bishop was writing about his role and personal knowledge of the legal proceedings, and leaving the rest to Lee. By using the ellipses the way you did, you wiped out this distinction in order to support your argument that
nothing in Lee's confessions could be relied on.
The "case" is the client's file that one takes to court; it involves everything outside the lawyer's personal purview.
"Facts connected with the trial" meant the legal proceedings; Bishop was leaving to Lee to write about the facts leading up to his arrest and trial. By using the ellipses, you misled the reader into thinking there was no distinction.
You will note that the definition of "case" at dictionary.com includes: "a set of facts giving rise to a legal claim, or to a defense to a legal claim." In other words, facts the attorney does not personally know.
It also means actions surrounding the legal proceeding itself. And by differentiating between this and what Lee knew, Bishop clearly was talking to his personal knowledge of the legal proceedings.
Bishop was a seasoned lawyer; "connected with the trial and history of the case" enveloped the massacre and much more -- the confessions contain much detail about pre-Massacre crimes with which Lee would have no knowledge, but Bishop's Tribune reporter friends would have.
Bishop was a seasoned lawyer, and he would never have told Lee (or anyone else) that he would simply make up facts, as you argue with the butchered quote.
So, when I edited my piece I had to continually be on the hunt for extraneous material to edit out. The ellipsed material was just such material -- it was redundant and, had it been added, would have only marginally strengthened my article.
It was not at all redundant -- you took out those few words to discard the distinction Bishop carefully made between what he would write and what Lee would write. The butchered quote was crucial to your argument that nothing in
Mormonism Unveiled could be trusted or relied on. This was not simply an issue of editing.
There are hundreds of examples of Bagley and Brooks doing the same sort of editing work in their books, as well as examples of my own work in publications of my own.
Editing is one thing; changing a quote to help your argument is another.
But, for a reader who may not read much academic literature or have an extensive library of such, I can see in hindsight how these ellipses can be seized upon for advantage; in further publications of mine I'll remember to assess that risk when editing.
I think you should also ask FARMS to issue a correction or clarification.