I am sorry it had to go so far.

[_why me]

I agree. I especially appreciate the links he provides for terms he uses that may not be familiar to all readers. For example, he mentions something he refers to as "God" on page 1 of that article. At that point I was about to stop reading because I already felt he was talking past me, but when I clicked on the link I was taken to a very helpful article on Wikipedia all about this "God" that really helped me understand where he was coming from. I wish all writers were so sensitive to the needs of their readers.

Okay....let me try this again. I couldn't care less about links. I was referring to his sentence structure and coherence of thought. What I linked to was not a bad piece of writing. Now it is true that his erotica needed some work. But when I read it, I just saw it as a very rough draft. Judging by his blog posts, his erotica could have been much better once he got the hang of it:

[_Doctor CamNC4Me]

Hello,

God. What a clown.

A Writer and Blogger who resides in the Pacific Northwest. Currently studying for a degree in Communications, actively seeking employment, developing and looking to launch a magazine publication for Short Fiction, Novel Excerpts and another magazine for Essays on the core principles of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. He is also looking to finish rewriting his first failed novel and submit that for publication

What an idiot.

V/R
Dr. Cameron

[_KimberlyAnn]

It seems tragic that force had to be used in this case. I feel strongly that I have been misrepresented in the worst fashion on this board and on others throughout the apostate cyber-world. But you all had it coming.

You see, in America we are a civil society wherein poor behavior is not condoned when it crosses into harassment, bullying, theft of ideas, and other vile behavior. I did not want to make the calls I did, but now I hope you vile people understand that it is not acceptable to break the law, involve my family, and threaten people with whom you disagree into silence. Since you pathetic worms cannot engage the ideas you attempt to drag others into your cesspool.

I did it once, quite easily, and I can do it again. Think about that the next time any of you low life losers attack me.

I felt a bit sorry for you a week or so ago and was among the folks here who spoke out against the posting of your Facebook photo. After reading your comments on MDD and, now, the baloney you've vomited onto this board, I no longer feel sorry for you in the least. You brought all your troubles on yourself.

You, SeattleSmutWriter, are the one misrepresenting. I am of the opinion that you are the one in violation of the law. Though it seems nearly impossible, your lame threats are even lamer than your hilariously poor writing.

PS: You are all a laughing stock.

Thanks to At the Ocean, I'd say it's more like this: "We are all laughing, Stocky."

KA

[_sock puppet]

On the subject of Google caches, it is really nice to know that Bermans's Myspace entry can still be enjoyed HERE.

It has such gems on it as "Also, I am a writer who have had some disappointment ..." and "As an up and coming author, I am attempting to develop a new form of Hardboiled Detective mystery with Erotica as the backdrop."

And will the delights never cease?

'At the Ocean' is cached too!

So go sue Google. And meanwhile the rest of us will be archiving ...

Wow, and to think, Tim's been befriended by John Steinbeck.

[_beastie]

On the subject of Google caches, it is really nice to know that Bermans's Myspace entry can still be enjoyed HERE.

It has such gems on it as "Also, I am a writer who have had some disappointment ..." and "As an up and coming author, I am attempting to develop a new form of Hardboiled Detective mystery with Erotica as the backdrop."

And will the delights never cease?

'At the Ocean' is cached too!

So go sue Google. And meanwhile the rest of us will be archiving ...

This uncovers yet ANOTHER lie. On MDD, Berman claimed that he wrote his smut while out of the church. And yet, on this cached myspace page, he says:

As an up and coming author, I am attempting to develop a new form of Hardboiled Detective mystery with Erotica as the backdrop. I enjoy all things sensual, intense, passionate, intimate and seductive while attempting to accomplish the goal of hooking the reader into the world of words where they transform into a very intense descriptive realm the reader can be lost in.

In the NEXT paragraph, he says:

Also, am interested in meeting other people who are members of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (Mormon), and those who enjoy writing, have a taste for classic literature, and those who enjoy good philosophical discussions.

[_EAllusion]

Beastie -

You can also find a lengthy apologetic piece published a month before. That's when he said he was an apostate. This is a person who posted here and openly said he'd deny he ever posted here. I don't think honesty is a strong-suit of his.

[_Bond James Bond]

B-O-O H-O-O.

Cry Me A (Wet) River

[_moksha]

Since you pathetic worms cannot engage the ideas you attempt to drag others into your cesspool.

I think I have a case of either whiplash or duress coming on.

[_Kishkumen]

Thanks to At the Ocean, I'd say it's more like this: "We are all laughing, Stocky."

Brilliant.

[_stemelbow]

Oh great, you get busy for a couple days, come back and learn you've missed another episode. What did I miss?