Church editors had suggested to the apostle that "referencing ‘some feminist thinkers’ would inevitably be read by many as ‘all feminist thinkers,’
Oh please. They have so little confidence in the reading comprehension of those who would read the talk that they think it is inevitable that "some" will be read as "all."
By this logic, when members covenant to give "all" to the church, they will inevitably think that they are only required to give "some."
If "some" is so easy to confuse with "all," then I guess you could say I attend "all" church meetings, keep "all" the commandments, and can answer "all" the temple recommend questions.
The lack of faith in the the ability of people to interpret words everyone of average intelligence has been able to distinguish since kindergarten (if not sooner) is laughable.
There are some who call me...Tim.