Holy crap: it just keeps getting better and better. Get a load of these comments on "SeN":
Genealogy wrote:Daniel,
I previously posted this, but you removed it for some reason. If the content is inappropriate please let me know so I can edit this post and remove the offending content.
I'm glad you changed the punching sound effect. It is much better now.
I'm sure the film is still in the initial rough stages and far from the polished finished product, but here are some continuity, and other issues that are being reported:
-If you watch from 1:02 to 1:05 you can clearly see the wireless microphone and wires hanging from the back of Martin Harris (guy in the red shirt kneeling).
-The plates and the bag, look at about 22 seconds in (after they're knocked from the actor's arms). The plates are clearly exposed and you can see a ring. Now check how the plates/bag look at about 33-34 seconds as Joseph tries to reach for them. I see a bag, but I don't see the plates. At 35 seconds in, we see the exposed plates again. At 36 seconds, Joseph grabs the bag and pulls it toward him. I don't see the plates. Then we see the exposed plates again at 36-37 seconds.
-The plates at 1:30 are clearly different than the ones earlier in the trailer. I have to say that the brown tape does not look good. During the fighting, the plates had a “sealed” part on the bottom that really looked like nothing more than brown duct tape wrapped around the bottom third, but later in the clip the plates are fully shown from the same angle, are much bigger, and there are unsealed plates all the way down? No continuity.
-The trailer seems to show these events with the assailants happening in the day, instead of night. Having Joseph use the sacred Golden Plates as a weapon to beat his attacker is not historical and certainly not something one would have expected Joseph to do. What about using his fists, a stick or a rock. Joseph was supposed to protect the Plates with his life and the Plates would probably not be the first thing he would use as a weapon to bash someone over the head with.
-Susan Easton Black,considering her status as emeritus professor of church history--states that critics have resorted to saying that the witnesses saw the plates with their "spiritual eyes." The implication, of course, is that the critics invented this from thin air. Not so; Martin Harris said this point-blank and critics are merely reminding us what Martin said.
DCP wrote:Gen'y: "I previously posted this, but you removed it for some reason."
I didn't remove it. Disqus is quirky and sometimes removes posts -- including mine -- on its own, for obscure reasons. When I see this, I restore them.
Gen'y: "I'm glad you changed the punching sound effect. It is much better now."
Sound smoothing -- or whatever the technical name for the process is -- is a standard part of preparing a film for release. We're in that stage right now.
Gen'y: "I'm sure the film is still in the initial rough stages and far from the polished finished product"
That's true.
Gen'y: "If you watch from 1:02 to 1:05 you can clearly see the wireless microphone and wires hanging from the back of Martin Harris (guy in the red shirt kneeling)."
I had already seen this claim on the Peterson Obsession Board, where it was originally posted (and where negative reviews of the "Witnesses" film have been appearing for at least a year).
It's incorrect. We used no such wireless microphones.
Gen'y: "The plates and the bag, look at about 22 seconds in (after they're knocked from the actor's arms). The plates are clearly exposed and you can see a ring. Now check how the plates/bag look at about 33-34 seconds as Joseph tries to reach for them. I see a bag, but I don't see the plates. At 35 seconds in, we see the exposed plates again. At 36 seconds, Joseph grabs the bag and pulls it toward him. I don't see the plates. Then we see the exposed plates again at 36-37 seconds."
LOL. You guys have too much time on your hands. I'll look at the relevant portions, but I think you and your friends tend to see problems where you hope to see them.
Gen'y: "The plates at 1:30 are clearly different than the ones earlier in the trailer. I have to say that the brown tape does not look good. During the fighting, the plates had a “sealed” part on the bottom that really looked like nothing more than brown duct tape wrapped around the bottom third, but later in the clip the plates are fully shown from the same angle, are much bigger, and there are unsealed plates all the way down? No continuity.
"Having Joseph use the sacred Golden Plates as a weapon to beat his attacker is not historical and certainly not something one would have expected Joseph to do. What about using his fists, a stick or a rock. Joseph was supposed to protect the Plates with his life and the Plates would probably not be the first thing he would use as a weapon to bash someone over the head with."
I'll pass your comments on to the producer and director. I doubt that there's actually much there.
Gen'y: "Susan Easton Black,considering her status as emeritus professor of church history--states that critics have resorted to saying that the witnesses saw the plates with their "spiritual eyes." The implication, of course, is that the critics invented this from thin air. Not so; Martin Harris said this point-blank and critics are merely reminding us what Martin said."
You'll need to take this up with Professor Black. But the plain fact is that this claim has only become really popular among critics in recent years, probably thanks to the efforts of Dan Vogel.
Genealogy wrote:Dan: "It's incorrect. We used no such wireless microphones."
Interesting, that's not what I've heard. I guess it could be any number of electronic devices then. Regardless, I'm sure you will want to have the electronic device CGI'd out.
Thanks for sharing your opinions Dan. I'm looking forward to viewing the finished and polished version.
DCP wrote:Gen'y: "Interesting, that's not what I've heard. "
You've presumably also heard that we're borderline insolvent, and that members of the cast and crew have been complaining about our failure to pay them.
I read that a couple of weeks ago over at your message board, from the Mini-Stalker. He just makes these things up. It's not even remotely true. Most of his claims are pure fiction, and this one is no exception.
Gen'y: "I guess it could be any number of electronic devices then."
It could also be none at all.
Gen'y: "I'm looking forward to viewing the finished and polished version."
I'll BET you are.
But you can already read dozens of reviews on the Peterson Obsession Board where you are a participant. No need to wait!
Genealogy wrote:Daniel,
It's interesting how you are lashing out at these constructive comments. It's almost like you believe your short trailer is above criticism.
All I know is if I had devoted so much time, energy and money to a film project I would welcome concerns, comments and yes, even criticism. I would even be grateful.
To each his own, I guess.
DCP wrote:Incidentally, my comment about our having used no wireless microphones of the type that you and your friends have "seen" in the trailer isn't a matter of my "opinion."
Genealogy wrote:DaniePeterson: "Incidentally, my comment about our having used no wireless microphones of the type that you and your friends have "seen" in the trailer isn't a matter of my "opinion."
We'll have to agree to disagree.
Regardless of what type of electronic device the actor is wearing, I'm glad you have forwarded this constructive criticism to the director.
Wow--look how touchy he is! Quite funny that he's flat out denying what all of us can plainly see with our own eyes. I hope someone asks about this at the panel this evening. Will the panel be videotaped, I wonder? And put up for viewing on "Interpreter"'s blog site? I bet this one really stings: he's probably enraged that someone would make such a blunder. Why didn't the script supervisor or the editor catch that? And, of course, the only way to fix it is to either delete the scene or spend the money to CGI it out of there. No wonder he's still begging for money!
"[I]f, while hoping that everybody else will be honest and so forth, I can personally prosper through unethical and immoral acts without being detected and without risk, why should I not?." --Daniel Peterson, 6/4/14