Kishkumen wrote: ↑Tue May 31, 2022 5:00 pm
The Book of Mormon is obviously written in the Biblical tradition. The most famous travel myth aside from the Exodus (which the Book of Mormon refers too repeatedly) is Noah building an ark on the command of God to survive the flood. The Book of Mormon has two similar stories: Nephi constructing a ship, and the Jaredites building barges. Both episodes are miracle tales. The Jaredite version is more obviously miraculous (vision of God), but both are miraculous.
I wasn't talking about the ship-building as such, which indeed has enough precedent to be a mini-genre, but about the teased detail of ore and smelting and tool-making. The story descends to the specifics of banging rocks together to make fire (even though this is so absurd that it must immediately be excused with fire having been arbitrarily forbidden by God for the past eight years and everyone eating raw food that was miraculously made sweet), and yet simply cuts to the next scene past all the potentially interesting stuff about mining and forging and making adequate bellows from hides.
Metalwork is a preoccupation of the text, because, hey, the book itself is supposedly made of metal plates. Smith operated in an environment in which there is a certain mystique to finding precious metals and working with metals. Oh, gee, I wonder why he focuses on Nephi working with metal!?!?!?! This preoccupation comes out of the treasure digging and bogus making operations that were clearly a big topic of interest at the time.
All the more reason to show us some interesting detail about this mining and smelting and forging, then, and not just breeze past them. As I tried to emphasize, my beef is not with
addressing the mining and bellows and smelting and forging, but with raising the issue that they would obviously be problematic under the circumstances, and then failing to deliver any interesting or informative story about how the problems were overcome. If you're writing a story that puts the characters in a graveyard, and you know your audience loves zombies, then you might certainly throw in a graveyard struggle with zombies, but you don't just say, "What about zombies? We got rid of the zombies and drove to Vegas."
The possibility that the mention of metal working in this account is *only* for the purposes of verisimilitude is fairly low.
Mentioning Nephi's metalworking difficulties does serve the purpose that is called, at least in one school of criticism,
"lampshading". That's when an author tries to excuse an obvious plot difficulty by drawing attention to it, in an effort to reassure the reader that the story isn't just stupid. Lampshading doesn't need to do more than point out the issue; merely pointing out the issue rather than actually dealing with it is what lampshading is. I can't think of any other narrative purpose that is served in this passage by merely mentioning these metalworking issues, as Nephi does, as opposed to either skipping over them blithely or giving a more interesting account of how they were handled.
But perhaps I'm just arguing from poverty of imagination. What other purposes could be served by the mentioning that Nephi gives these issues, without the further treatment that he does not give them?
I was a teenager before it was cool.